Dan's free Short: review before anything goes to him

Lead L004, Riding Along With Dan. Requested through our free-Short ad; we confirmed on Nov 15 and promised delivery by Wednesday. Nothing has been sent to Dan.

The Short (720p preview, 38.2 s; v4 final fixes)

Cover

BE PREPARED cover

What we made

TitleWhat I keep in my truck, always
From his video"Work Around the house weekend" (ny46j1X7Cv8), 0:41 to 1:23, tightened to 38.2 s
v3 changesAll cuts rendered in one pass so sound and picture stay locked (audio length equals video length within a frame); title enlarged to 140 px; a 7-frame fade at the end; new cover frame with eye contact (frame chosen, face never retouched).
v2 changesAfter an independent critique: captions kept inside the safe area with fixed line breaks (no re-wrap jumps); short caption flashes merged; the title is bigger and held 2 s with no word captions under it; audio joins moved to natural pauses with short fades; the ending runs to the end of "fluid" with a 150 ms fade; every jump cut has a clear 7-8% scale step; the cover is 10% tighter on a frame where he faces the camera.
EditThree tightening cuts: a 1.7 s pause after "the charger", his restart "You always got to be...", and an "uh". Each cut is covered by a gentle punch-in toward his face. Light exposure and contrast correction for the bright window. No change to his appearance, no music, no branding from us.
CaptionsStyled pop-in captions, key words in yellow. Checked word for word: two transcription models on the source, two extra passes on the one unclear line ("That's in here too", 3 of 4 passes), and a fresh transcript of the finished file (the finished file was re-checked against the source transcripts; every caption is within 0.15 s of the spoken word). "Uh" is not captioned.
AudioHigh-pass, light noise reduction, -14.0 LUFS, true peak -1.5 dBTP.
Format1080x1920, 30 fps, H.264 (full-quality master kept on the CoS desktop).
SourceHis original is 1080x1920. We recorded the clip from YouTube's 1080p playback, so it is close to his upload quality. If he sends the original file we can re-render from it.

Delivery email (draft, not sent)

Subject: Your free Short is ready

Hi Daniel,

Your free Short is ready: [review link]

We chose the moment at 0:41 in "Work Around the house weekend" because it stands on its own: you walk through what you always keep in the truck, the compressor, the charger, the tire inflator and the washer fluid, and land on why you've always got to be prepared. Please check the captions, and download the file when you're happy with it.

If you'd like more clips from your videos, we also make 5 captioned Shorts for $97, with no monthly plan. Just reply and we'll confirm your footage supports five useful clips before we start.

Thanks,
T.M. Clinkscales
Co-Founder
Watch Next Studio

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[review link] = a shared Drive link to the final file and cover, made after Ty approves.